Areas I Need Work On

One of my main issues with my writing is my inconstant coherence. Coherence is the flow of your piece of work, and it determines how easily a reader can read and interpret it. I think part of the reason my coherence needs work is that I go deep into the topics I write about. Once I go into extreme detail in my work, it can sometimes be too messy or confusing to read. Though my coherence is not awful, it is evident that my coherence needs improvement whenever I write about a complicated topic. Coherence is essential because it affects how a person reads a piece of writing. It allows the author to take an intricate idea and put it into words in a way that the reader can understand it. Coherence is a necessity to make sure that the reader can understand and interpret a particular piece of writing.